Wednesday, July 29, 2020

Mood music/story Part One

Today at school we had to write a quick story and find a song that fits the mood the persons in mine was greedy. Hope you like the story

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  2. Haiii Kaylen this is very funny and i like it very much i think you should make a part two because you said at the end that u needed more... so I would love if you made a second. :) From Sophie Clarke

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  3. This music fits the scene you've created well! I can just imagine a greedy, blobby thing sneaking up on the poor child, then guzzling it! And I agree with Sophie - Part 2, please!

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  4. I would like to hear about what 'the thing' does next too - great choice of music!

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  5. Thank you guys for the tip I have made a part 2 now hope you like it

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